{"id":203,"date":"2009-02-03T07:00:00","date_gmt":"2009-02-03T15:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/wwwold.sketchwar.org\/?p=203"},"modified":"2009-02-03T07:00:00","modified_gmt":"2009-02-03T15:00:00","slug":"advertising-edition-ras-entry","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/?p=203","title":{"rendered":"Advertising Edition: R.A.’s entry"},"content":{"rendered":"
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INT. OFFICE – DAY<\/p>\n

TITLE – Mitchell-Bell, Inc. New York 1962<\/p>\n

GARETH MACLAREN (early 30s, wan with thinning hair) sits opposite BARRY NEWCOMB (a late 20s go-getter with moviestar looks). Hair and suit styles are appropriate to the mid-1960s. Whenever he’s not speaking, Barry peers intently, like a detective divining motive.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

We’re not the first agency you approached, are we Mr. MacLaren?<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

No. No, I’ve been all over town. Spent an hour at Sterling-Cooper while their Creative Director waxed eloquent about something or another.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

Draper’s very good.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

He certainly seemed to think so.<\/p>\n

(Beat)<\/p>\n

Took a meeting at McMann and Tate, but the copywriter never showed up. Sat in a board room with Tate while a crow kept tapping on the window like it wanted to come in and pitch. Very awkward.<\/p>\n

(Beat)<\/p>\n

I even met with Rock Hunter.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

He’s become quite successful.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

Seems to have spoiled him.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

Well you certainly have a sticky problem, Mr. MacLaren. But I’m not clear why you think there’s money in it.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

My father believed there was. He came to America with the clothes on his back and spent the rest of his life building a company by anticipating what the public wanted before they knew they wanted it. Before he died, he told me this was the one goal he never achieved.<\/p>\n

(Beat)<\/p>\n

I think I owe it to my father, for all he sacrificed and all he accomplished, to do this for him. Can you help?<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

There’s no ad campaign we can create that can help you.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

So you can’t help me either.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

I didn’t say that, Mr. MacLaren. I’m facing facts. No one else in town came up with anything either because, forgive me, the idea is just crazy.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

Maybe it is. But I’ve got to try. You won’t help?<\/p>\n

Barry ponders a moment.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

You said your father knew what people wanted before they did, right?<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

Yes.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

Then maybe this is an R&D problem, not an advertising problem. At least not an advertising problem for today.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

I see where you’re going.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

You see Mr. MacLaren, Mitchell-Bell is part of a much larger concern–<\/p>\n

INT. OFFICE – DAY<\/p>\n

TITLE – Mitchell-Bell, Inc. New York 1992<\/p>\n

Barry and Gareth are joined by MELINDA RESTON (20s and casually dressed) in his updated office. Barry looks even more dashing with silver hair. Gareth is wiry and fit with a few wisps of gray hair all that remains. The two older men wear suits.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

Just skip to the bottom line, Melinda. How close are we.<\/p>\n

MELINDA<\/p>\n

At least another 30 years.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

That can’t be! We’ve been running non-stop since ’62.<\/p>\n

GARETH<\/p>\n

Barry, that’s what my people are saying as well. I’ve just accepted that it’s a bigger problem than we realized and I may not live to see the day.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

Melinda, is there anything we can do?<\/p>\n

MELINDA<\/p>\n

I think so. We’ve been seeing a lot of success with the campaigns on the new Hummers. We think maybe pushing in that direction might help. We can spur the public to embrace a whole new class of what we’re calling Sport Utility Vehicles.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

How much will that help?<\/p>\n

MELINDA<\/p>\n

We think we can soften the ground considerably. Maybe cut the total time in half.<\/p>\n

BARRY<\/p>\n

That’ll have to do.<\/p>\n

INT. CONFERENCE ROOM – DAY<\/p>\n

TITLE – Mitchell-Bell, Inc. New York 2010<\/p>\n

Barry and Gareth are still plugging away. Barry’s aging like Paul Newman, Gareth like Abe Vigoda. The lights are dim and the room is filled with young men and women in casual attire. The light of a monitor flickers on everyone’s face.<\/p>\n

From the speakers, the recognizable CLINK, CLINK of two ice cubes being dropped in a glass followed by the fizzy sound of a carbonated beverage being poured.<\/p>\n

Zoom in on TELEVISION showing ad.<\/p>\n

INT. BAR – NIGHT<\/p>\n

ICE CUBES land in glass. Cola is poured into the glass.<\/p>\n

NARRATOR (O.S.)<\/p>\n

Mmm. Cool, fresh, invigorating. Nothing refreshes like MacLarens.<\/p>\n

The glass sits on a black velvet tabletop. Nothing is visible beyond the glass. The ice cubes glint as they bob in the sparkling amber fluid.<\/p>\n

NARRATOR (O.S.) (CONT’D)<\/p>\n

MacLarens Ice. Now available in Alaska.<\/p>\n

Zoom out to reveal…<\/p>\n

EXT. STREET – TWILIGHT<\/p>\n

The television is in the window of a small electronics store. The sign above reads NANOOK’S TV AND RADIO. An ESKIMO stands in front of the window watching. He wears shorts, t-shirt, and flip-flops. As the commercial ends, he turns and we see a SINGLE TEAR run down his face.<\/p>\n

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