{"id":1743,"date":"2012-01-27T18:17:31","date_gmt":"2012-01-28T01:17:31","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/?p=1743"},"modified":"2012-01-27T18:17:31","modified_gmt":"2012-01-28T01:17:31","slug":"detritus-topic-you-left-something-behind","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/?p=1743","title":{"rendered":"Detritus (Topic:  &#8220;You left something behind&#8221;)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s my take on the &#8220;You left something behind&#8221; edition of Sketchwar.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<div class=\"fountain\">\n<p class=\"action\">FADE IN:<\/p>\n<p class=\"sceneheader\">INT. STORE ROOM &#8211; DAY<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">TAGELLI (30s) and DAVEY (20s) look around a store room.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">A few shelves line the walls, and an empty pedestal sits in the middle of the room. There are no windows, and only a single door. There&#8217;s a grated air vent in one of the walls. <\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">MR. ST. JOHN (50s) stands expectantly.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">MR. ST. JOHN<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">I&#8217;m afraid this is beyond even your powers of detection, Detective Tagelli. No way in, no way out, and still: the gem was taken right out from under our noses. <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Eh, it&#8217;s worth a look around.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Something on the pedestal catches his attention. Tagelli walks over to the pedestal a closer look, taking out a magnifying glass. <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">No matter how good they are at stealing, the bad guys always leave something behind. <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">MR. ST. JOHN<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">I&#8217;ll leave you to it.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Mr. St. John leaves.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">DAVEY<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">You found something?<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Tagelli has picked up something minuscule with tweezers, and studies it through the lens.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey tries to get a look.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">A hair.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Tagelli notices Davey.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Well, don&#8217;t just stand there, Davey &#45;&#45; se arch the place!<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey heads off to look at the shelves.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Red.  Not dyed.  Short, so most likely male. And not smart enough to use a hat to &#45;&#45; <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">DAVEY<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Detective!<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey points at something on a shelf by the door. Tagelli gets a closer look while Davey keeps casing the room. <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Fabric. Red. Plaid. Flannel. Expensive, from the thread count. And from the placement, I&#8217;m guessing we&#8217;re dealing with a lefty. <\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">DAVEY<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">What&#8217;s this?<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey picks a bright, fuchsia-colored feather out of the air vent.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Tagelli and Davey both stare at it for a bit.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey hands it to Tagelli.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">I&#46;&#46;&#46; huh.  He.  He had a boa?  I don&#8217;t even &#45;&#45;<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Davey finds something behind a shelf.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">DAVEY<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Now this is just weird.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">He drags out the object:  it&#8217;s an axe!<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">&#46;&#46;&#46; the hell?<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">DAVEY<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Oh, and it&#8217;s got a note attached: &#8220;Ha ha ha, you will never catch me Tagelli, because I am a big gay lumberjack. Ha ha ha ha.&#8221; <\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">They both take this in for a moment.<\/p>\n<p class=\"action\">Mr. St. John pokes his head in.<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">MR. ST. JOHN<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">Progress, gentlemen?<\/p>\n<p class=\"character\">TAGELLI<\/p>\n<p class=\"dialogue\">I think you got robbed by a really clever fourteen-year-old.<\/p>\n<p class=\"transition\">FADE OUT.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Peter&#8217;s take on the &#8220;You left something behind&#8221; edition of Sketchwar.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":6,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[5],"tags":[256],"class_list":["post-1743","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-sketches","tag-you-left-something-behind"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1743","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/6"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1743"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1743\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1744,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1743\/revisions\/1744"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1743"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1743"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.sketchwar.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1743"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}