Comments on: Virgin Mother’s Day http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/ Comedy in the battle arena Thu, 11 Mar 2010 16:42:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: piano songs http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-997 piano songs Wed, 17 Feb 2010 06:00:26 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-997 <strong>piano songs...</strong> Megacool Blog indeed!... if anyone else has anything it would be much appreciated. Great website Enjoy!... piano songs…

Megacool Blog indeed!… if anyone else has anything it would be much appreciated. Great website Enjoy!…

]]> By: Sketch War » Blog Archive » Peter’s Commentary on the “Mother’s Day” Edition http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-996 Sketch War » Blog Archive » Peter’s Commentary on the “Mother’s Day” Edition Mon, 27 Jul 2009 02:30:39 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-996 [...] “Virgin Mother’s Day” Definitely a good concept here, and mostly a good delivery. For a second draft, I’d recommend creating a clearer ‘arc’ to the complaints about the children. First there’s a minor complaint. Then there’s a heavier complaint. Then an even more serious one. In fact, the women could be deliberately trying to outdo each other (”Oy! You think *you* have troubles?!”) in ‘My Kids Suck’ poker. [...] [...] “Virgin Mother’s Day” Definitely a good concept here, and mostly a good delivery. For a second draft, I’d recommend creating a clearer ‘arc’ to the complaints about the children. First there’s a minor complaint. Then there’s a heavier complaint. Then an even more serious one. In fact, the women could be deliberately trying to outdo each other (”Oy! You think *you* have troubles?!”) in ‘My Kids Suck’ poker. [...]

]]> By: Sketch War » Blog Archive » Mother’s Day Wrapup http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-995 Sketch War » Blog Archive » Mother’s Day Wrapup Sat, 09 May 2009 15:42:10 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-995 [...] took us back to Galilee where we find out that mothers just want some [...] [...] took us back to Galilee where we find out that mothers just want some [...]

]]> By: LRaica http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-994 LRaica Wed, 06 May 2009 16:54:58 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-994 Great sketch. Its clever, its smart. Well played :-) Great sketch. Its clever, its smart. Well played :-)

]]> By: David_N_Wilson http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-993 David_N_Wilson Wed, 06 May 2009 14:31:33 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-993 lmao "Resurrection Tour, Year 0" ! I love this. lmao "Resurrection Tour, Year 0" ! I love this.

]]> By: Davina http://www.sketchwar.org/sketches/virgin-mothers-day/comment-page-1/#comment-992 Davina Wed, 06 May 2009 12:54:07 +0000 http://wwwold.sketchwar.org/?p=1185#comment-992 Oh I get to be your first! I loved it, very funny. :) Oh I get to be your first! I loved it, very funny. :)

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