The Day Before Yesterday!!!

9 March 2009
by R.A. Porter

I want you to picture the worst possible special effects on this one. I mean, the kind of thing that would have embarrassed the I Dream of Jeannie crew. The kind of stuff that Irwin Allen would have been ashamed to show his mother. Visible guidewires, cheap green screens, the works.

And now…

INT. BAR – NIGHT

JAMIE, nerdy in the “Hollywood leading man wearing glasses” mold, hovers at the elbow of AMY, the poster child for hot blonds who star on posters. She is turned away from him, chatting with D-BAG #1 and D-BAG #2. Jamie tries to get her attention.

NARRATOR (V.O.)

Spurned by the woman he secretly loved, Doctor Jamie McElroy vowed to change his past.

INT. LAB – DAY

Typical movie lab. Beakers, burners, a sparking Jacob’s Ladder, fill a bench. No rhyme or reason to their arrangement. Jamie hunches over, working on something small.

NARRATOR (V.O.)

With scientific know-how...

INT. MUSEUM, EGYPTIAN EXHIBIT – NIGHT

Jamie reads hieroglyphics, taking notes. One of the glyphs looks like the Apollo lander.

NARRATOR (V.O.)

...and the wisdom of the ancients...

INT. LAB – DAY

Jamie’s got a bulky device strapped to his wrist. It looks just like a ’70s calculator watch. He punches in some numbers and vanishes!

NARRATOR (V.O.)

...he unlocked the secret of time.

EXT. ZEPPELIN LANDING FIELD – EVENING

Jamie runs away from the Hindenburg disaster. Note that this and all similar EFX should be obvious green screens.

INT. INDEPENDENCE HALL – DAY

Jamie stands nearby as the Declaration is signed.

EXT. STREET – DAY

Jamie composited into the background as Britney gets out of a car exposing her crotch.

INT. BAR – NIGHT

Back where we started. Jamie’s at Amy’s elbow.

NARRATOR (V.O.)

And used that time to master the art of seduction.

JAMIE

Excuse me, Amy?

Amy turns and bumps into Jamie. His wrist lightly hits the bar and his time traveling watch explodes in a shower of sparks.

JAMIE (CONT’D)

Oh no!

NARRATOR (V.O.)

But now, he’s trapped in the past. Back in...

Title – THE DAY BEFORE YESTERDAY!!!

AMY

Oh, I’m sorry. Is it badly broken?

JAMIE

It’s...destroyed.

The BARTENDER comes over.

BARTENDER

Hey, guys. Are you going to want any food?

AMY

Uh, sure. What are your specials?

JAMIE

(despondent)

French dip and cream of broccoli soup.

BARTENDER

Yeah. How did you know that?

CUT TO:

INT. BAR – NIGHT

Later, Jamie and Amy are joined by LEVAR MUKASEY.

LEVAR

You say the mechanism is irreparable?

JAMIE

I’ll never get home now. I’ll be trapped in this...nightmare world, forever a man out of time.

Jamie squints and holds a hand above his head to block the light.

JAMIE (CONT’D)

The light is so harsh and cold in this time.

LEVAR

There must be something we can do.

AMY

Can’t you just build another one?

The scientists ignore her.

LEVAR

Perhaps we could duplicate your research?

JAMIE

In this primitive era?

LEVAR

Good point.

AMY

Can’t you just go to your lab and get the one you’re working on right now?

The scientists continue to ignore her. Men talking here, honey! Big, important men!

JAMIE

No, I have to face facts. I’m never going to see my home again.

INT. JAMIE’S HOME- NIGHT

Amy sits on the couch while Jamie paces behind her.

JAMIE

Maybe I could build a cryogenic pod and freeze myself until science catches up with me.

AMY

Jamie, honey, why don’t you sit down. You’re just wearing a hole in the carpet.

JAMIE

Yeah, I mean...I did come back to try to win you over, right?

AMY

Exactly.

(seductively)

And you have.

Amy pats the couch. Jamie sits down and puts his arm around Amy.

AMY

There. Isn’t that better?

She leans in and gives him a kiss.

JAMIE

Yeah. It is. Thanks. You want to watch TV?

Jamie hands the remote to Amy.

AMY

Sure. Oooh. It’s a new “Gray’s Anatomy”!

JAMIE

No! I saw that one...The Day Before Yesterday!

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R.A. Porter is an aspiring television writer who currently toils away in the software mines. He can be found at DreamLoom, his personal blog, Tumblr, and stalked on Twitter.

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9 Responses to “The Day Before Yesterday!!!”

  1. krobertson Says:

    Groundhog Day….with D-Bag#1 and D-Bag#2. And I'm hearing the "Buck Rogers in the 25th Century" opening music too. Nice!

  2. mbrownlee Says:

    Awe. Some. The opening narration is killer.

  3. R.A. Porter Says:

    Since I've been slowly rewatching Buck Rogers on Hulu these last few weeks, that makes me smile quite broadly!

  4. R.A. Porter Says:

    Thanking you kindly, sir.

  5. E.L. Raica Says:

    Great parody! Why does it always seem like, in time travel stories, its either an accident they get trapped in time, or they go back for a woman or their family. The goal is never something substantial that will change the face of humanity. For instance, stopping Hitler, rigging the 2000 election, going back to that moment when Rick James signed his first record deal. Anyway, most enjoyable! :-)

  6. Sketch War » Blog Archive » Peter’s Commentary on the “Time Travel” Edition Says:

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  9. Bob Coutts Says:

    I’m glad you wrote this post, as it gave me another view point, I had not thought about.

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